I really like Noatak/Amon's character. And I'm really really upset that he died in the finale. So I drew this to cheer myself up. It's not working though. To be honest I was a bit disappointed with the finale. It wasn't horrible, but it's definitely below my expectations. Maybe because it's so fast paced? I don't really know.
Anyway, this is also to continue this series : It's rougher than the others, but I'm too tired to fix anything. So I'm leaving it like this for a while.
Comments and faves are always appreciated! And leave me a critique if you have the time, I'd be really greatful!
I've yet to write critiques but here it goes. This drawing is amazing. You shading is briliantly done. The hair looks as if it's actually flowing in the wind. I do however, think the hand looks a bit sketchyer than the rest of the drawing, and the water looks slightly more like lightning. And i do agree with jirachithegreat, that if you zoomed out slightly more, it would greatly affect the drawing's drama. The thumb also looks like it was slightly cut out, maybe you accidentally went over it with that color you used for shading. but, Other than that this picture is so awesome!
I rarely write critiques, but this is amazing, I'll admit, I'm a big LOK and ATLA fan, so I'll attempt to be fair. It's expressive, the lighting is quite nice, I rarely see people come at pictures with the angle, so composition is original enough, and it's accurate, you got Amon/Noatak's outfitting correctly, and even the expression is right, it's accurate! I do have one issue with this picture however super awesome (XD) it is a bit...close. If you could zoom out just a bit and show the water, not even the other Equalists, it could improve the picture, just my opinion, but still stunning.
I don't mind him dying, the death scene was properly done, it wasn't a pathetic defeat like Ozai's.
The only thing that annoys me is the fact that he is a bender... I really didn't want him to be one. I wanted him to be like the villain version of Batman. No powers, yet can still kick ass.
This drawing is amazing. You shading is briliantly done. The hair looks as if it's actually flowing in the wind.
I do however, think the hand looks a bit sketchyer than the rest of the drawing, and the water looks slightly more like lightning. And i do agree with jirachithegreat, that if you zoomed out slightly more, it would greatly affect the drawing's drama. The thumb also looks like it was slightly cut out, maybe you accidentally went over it with that color you used for shading.
but, Other than that this picture is so awesome!
It's expressive, the lighting is quite nice, I rarely see people come at pictures with the angle, so composition is original enough, and it's accurate, you got Amon/Noatak's outfitting correctly, and even the expression is right, it's accurate!
I do have one issue with this picture however super awesome (XD) it is a bit...close. If you could zoom out just a bit and show the water, not even the other Equalists, it could improve the picture, just my opinion, but still stunning.
That's all!
^_^
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